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Going through the robotic motions
seemingly lifelike
till upon closer inspection
the assembly line production
becomes apparent in the movement
under the costume of a soft skin
under the misillusioned theories of creativity
striving for something
more than human experience
I don't want to be a cliche, but I fear that the motions have all been done before. What then makes anything we do new? How can we add new things to the collective experience of a billion people?
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pureXcorpse's avatar
I've been thinking about a similar thing a lot lately.
You put it into words well, and honestly, I don't usually like free verse.
This is an exception. Well done.